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This is my first flash...It took me a week or two.
Its part of a much larger concept actually...
Maybe ill work on it some more who knows.
Flash can be a pain in the !@#...lol
Im sure most of you know.
Im thinking about selling my brother into slavery to buy the program.
All constructive criticism highly appreciated...
All you angry critics can rot in hell.
Merry Christmas.

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allow self page turning.

The pages turn before I can finish. I am a slow reader...



Nice art, good to see story telling.

The biggest issues I saw were a) the pacing was a bit slow and, of course, b) the written narrative, which has all sorts of problems, from different reading speeds, to miss spelled words, drawing peoples eyes away from the picture and giving no opportunity for inflection.

Definitely get flash if you can ;)


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I DON'T BELIVE THIS IS YOUR FIRST FLASH

If this is your first flash,you gonna be BIG PR0 man!


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BD stile

Cool, no more that cool, awesame


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wow

ok, if you drew all of this during the trial period of flash, then I am amazed. nice job. the page idea was pretty interesting too. Of course, you're english could use some work... but then whatever.


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Aug 7, 2009
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