allow self page turning.
The pages turn before I can finish. I am a slow reader...
Nice art, good to see story telling.
The biggest issues I saw were a) the pacing was a bit slow and, of course, b) the written narrative, which has all sorts of problems, from different reading speeds, to miss spelled words, drawing peoples eyes away from the picture and giving no opportunity for inflection.
Definitely get flash if you can ;)
I DON'T BELIVE THIS IS YOUR FIRST FLASH
If this is your first flash,you gonna be BIG PR0 man!
Cool, no more that cool, awesame
ok, if you drew all of this during the trial period of flash, then I am amazed. nice job. the page idea was pretty interesting too. Of course, you're english could use some work... but then whatever.