Well for your first one....

Not bad for your first attempt.... And for you to make it better.... Perhaps a little more detail for your model.... Stuff like eyebrows a mouth or nose.. Basic Facial features.. And maybe a lttle smoother lines some of them are slightly rough like in the arms... some sort of background music would not hurt anything also... But off of effort alone and for your fist try I can easily give it a 5 out of ten just for effort and a fist try... All in all not bad

Graphics

Work on the graphics some. The model itself looks like she's standing with her back to you and her neck craned completely backwards.

Rofl.

Well for you first set its not nearly as bad as others. It simple and to the under detailed point. Anyway I would like to share a little comidy. I started the game up and took off all the close to start fresh. Little did i know my screen has some dust on it... So when I removed her pants it looked like pubs,instanly getting a WTf from me. That is all...

Not too bad for a first attempt.

I give you credit for a decent first try. It does not appear to be glitched or anything, which is a good start. I thought the facial expressions were a nice touch.

The biggest problems I usually see with dressup games is the crowding from numerous outfits. In your future attempts, I would suggest maybe creating a side-menu that opens a mini closet for different outfits. Perhaps another menu that allows you to select eye color, skin tone, facial and eye expersions, ect. By doing this you give yourself more screen to work with and it allows you to enlarge your character and create a more detailed image.

On my opinion...

The games allright except for a few things...
1) The objects are extremelly hard to click and drag (especially the small ones) Try looking at some tut's to fix that.

2 ) Detail details detais. As an mildly experienced anime artist, the thing that separates good drawings/animations from bad ones are the details (Folds and creases on the clothes, shadow and lightning)

3) Try to add a more dynamic background and maybe some music!

Anyway, you did great and I congratulate you ^_^ Keep at it, and dont listen to haters!!!