Hello old friend. Impressive work.
I animation is amirable, but the theme is more or less depressing. The world is in poor economic times, and this only adds to the anguish the people of it are experiencing. It would've been more enjoyable if it was related to fiction rather than reality, and in my eyes, the internet should be an entertaining escape.
Aside from that, as your first hand-drawn animation, I will commend your artistry and I'm looking forward to your future work with great anticipation.