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Bojack vs Broly Part 1

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This is my very first flash since a long time i did never understand the flashmakers and till yesterday i watch many tutorials i an got it :D
Ok my english is much better now ;) thats why i understand the most now
Between i never thought it would take so long to make flashes so i just made the 1st part :)
the second will be done someday i am so exhausted of the 1 part


I hope you will like this Battle i tried my best to make a good battle


PS: In any case i dont know why the fight music got slowed down a little i did not changed the speed :S

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kool

real good what frame speed do u use

NightmareBroly responds:

i use 16 or 18 ^^ need fix out wich do u should use because of the sprite size O.o

Not Bad

Firstly the positives, the fighting flowed quite well and was kept at a decent speed, you also used a more original match-up for a DBZ sprite fight. However some elements need improvement, the background seemed blurred and undetailed, making it clash with the fighters. the music was somewhat off-pitch and the flash was too short. Fix those problems and this series has real potential.

well

Not bad. Way too short. And by the way, you aren't supposed to add those notes from the preloader into the movie. Look close at the beginning. Also, it just didn't feel right. Not sure what it was though. So, no points get knocked off until I figure that one out. Well, keep up the good work. Improve a bit, and you'll be alright. Flash isn't an overnight job. I am having problems making buttons too. I can make them, but I can't get them to do their jobs. So, yeah. Hope that works out for you.

it was ok

its your first flash and its pretty good i didnt notice anything with the music the only thing wrong is the lack of buttons lol. make broly win he is beast

not too bad of fight....

the only thing really wrong with it was no play button it just started up

NightmareBroly responds:

thats the problem i know how to make a flash with sprite but i dont know how to make a button i dont get this, this is m first flash :S
can u help me there out so i can add a button :O

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Jul 31, 2009
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