Great
Well, for your first flash, this was great. The art was okay... the animation was a little choppy though, but I won't deduct points for that since you are still a beginner. Good job! :D
Author Comments
I'm a beginner in all this animation stuff. I know it's nothing special but I'll get better...
It doesn't have any audio. I'm not at that point yet... \
Please ignore the DEMO sign. It's just there. I didn't put it there...
Please enjoy!!! :D
bloominglove responds:
lol... thanks... switching this from gif to swf made it look like weird...
cmon guys XD
I mean, L is more of a dark person to me... but still, give this person some props XD its her first time, heres a 9 for beginners creativity. =)
bloominglove responds:
thank you! :D nicest comment so far today...
Very Cute!
An adorable animation! But they are right about the whole "no demo" thing. You have a very developed style and i would love to see it in a full animation. So much potential!
bloominglove responds:
the demo sign is just there... I didn't put it there... but thanks
No demos in Newgrounds!
The Flash Portal isn't place for alphas and test. There is a specific portal for alphas.
bloominglove responds:
really...? I can tell that posting it here was the wrong idea...
But...
The title has music in the name =(
lol I think that should've been one of your main concerns.
Could've gotten a 7 perhaps if you added some audio and sounds to it.
bloominglove responds:
I know But sadly I'm not at that level yet.