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Ant men

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this was a stick men animation use with ants, and i didn't realize how hard it was until i got half way and said never mine. but the ideas there, i just didn't like it. try it out if you want if you have your own idea .this is just going in to my online newgrounds file thanks.

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Hmm, not bad man.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

I think the Ant Men looked pretty good and for the most part the animation was smooth and perfectly fine. I don't like that a few times you didn't even include the animation of the bullets though. Sometimes you didn't even know who was shooting until you noticed the person that was shot. Next time I recommend adding the animation to the bullets for all of the Ants.

I really enjoyed the background to this submission. You did a good job on going into detail with the pictures, books, etc.. That really made the submission good!

~ Story/Content ~

I liked the use of ants instead of stickmen. I would have liked to see you do this and actually finish it. I understand that flash is hard and yes it is hard, but you are clearly decent at it all around. I recommend starting it by having the two different commanders telling their armies what the mission is (to get the cake obviously, but you could also build on that by having them collect a large group of food) and also giving them a speech to get pumped up.

There needs to be a way to tell from the different armies which can be done by color differences. I understand they are ants, but one group could be fire ants and the others could be carpenter ants, etc.. After they get their speech they could go on and you see the war being fought, etc.. The story would be up to you from here on, but I think it's a good way to approach it.

~ Audio ~

The sound effects were really good here. Just about the right volume and synced well with the animation. Something like this would be cool with voices, but of course that would depend on how much more content that you add to it.

~ Overall ~

A nice short flash, but really needs some work. I know that you think flash is hard, but keep practicing and you will get better. Also, why is the genre sports? I don't see where this is really sports related.

jokebookpro responds:

I dont know why it say sports but it always says sports, i guess i didn't finish the cartoon cause it would look better as a game thanks tho, you know a worms game like..

PRETTY GOOD!!

I don't have flash, but I hear it isn't that hard.....if so, why did you give up? Were you doing it frame by frame? I think there are easier ways than that.......

pretty cool

nice animation, quality, and sound

huh?

was an ok animation but what are they fighting for?
the cake?

Kewl!

This should be called ''Tast Piece of Pie-Ant Style!'

Credits & Info

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3,871
Votes
11
Score
3.41 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 26, 2009
2:50 PM EDT