OK what was that...

pretty good story if i can say so, but just work on simple shape characters. and thicken the line tool it helps. don't use liner painting just take some time to shade with the line tool .and take off the line its easy. keep it up

better luck next time?

sorry to tell you, but the truth is always the best to improve, your animations skills are low, accept my constructive criticism and maybe learn the basic stick animations before you start trying the complicated animations like you have tried here.

thanks?

Sounds nice

Its sounds good and the voice acting is pretty nice but your animation stinks.