I lik how you gave him a funny name xD ismail.... is that the new e-mail lol very good exept i reckon you should have called him e-mail :)
actually that is his real name lol... also ismail means ishmael (or whatever) in english you probably know
I guess it's not bad but.. still.I dunno'.
ok, needs work
here is the deal. the actual animation was really good, but the flash wuz gay, also get a better mic, but your animation looked good, you could make some good flashes if u got a better mic and had different flash ideas, good work
not bad for an hour, I suppose
well keep up the good work, I dont really know anything about flash, but this seems good for a 10 year old and in one hour.
as a singer, who's well used to using microphones, I can offer you one piece of advice: you can avoid those distorted clips (or "pops"), by either using a pop shield , or by not breathing directly onto the mic (ie point the mic diagonally at your cheek)
Back off from the mic, man
And maybe not post it on Newgrounds?
thanks for feedback, not!