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Dont touch the smoke

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Jul 20, 2009 | 8:09 PM EDT

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Well, this is my very first flash clip.

I made it with Windows movie maker and a trial version of flash MX.

As of yesterday, the trial expired.

So if you liked the vid : too bad , i don't know when I'm going to get the real version.

If you didn't like it:

Wel, then you suck,

but you're also lucky :P

please rate and vote everyone .



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Only stopped in here...

'Cause I saw a review of yours on some other Flash and saw that your personal icon was your own brand of the the NG Level Maker 2 icon. So I went to your user-page and saw that you had submit this Flash... and that, oddly enough, your Flash's preview icon is the same icon.

Anyway... the actual fight-scene wasn't too bad. The stick-figures were maybe a tad simplistic, and their heads seemed to shrink and grow at random in some spots. The only thing I didn't quite get was the jumping/flipping in the beginning between each word. Seemed like it was just an excuse to lengthen the clip with a re-used section of the animation... .but didn't really add anything (except a bit of confusion).

Besides this I agree with "Nemakachec"... the story coming down to being about "smokes" kinda detracts from the punchline, rather than adding to it.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


This shit is like cancer.... fucking great
keep going!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

super vet xD

super vet xD

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the fight scene

but does it really HAVE to be about smokes?

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Rated 0 / 5 stars

So there was a bird and his name was havtfluckrn

Ok your flash kinda bad, I mean I can see you tried pretty hard, but because your using flash you get this really slow text effect and it's supposed to build up tension, like your making us all ready for insane grapics, but your not. So take some other advice, I mean it's down under here but a bird wrote it not me ok.

The shadeyman / corporate torrents kinda own . go type adobe in isohunt or piratebay and look for corporate, it's CS 3 but that will do. (Shadeyman is CS 4 but that one gives a little more problems.. )