Hah Ha! This one is good
Can't wait untill the next one because I want to know what is going on. And if you can, try to add voices, if not... oh well, right?
HAHA, thanks man.
Yer, I'm half drunk
lol at the first few parts XD
Fun flash, with some dodgy grammer.
Not too bad, it's nice and colorful , so it's gets away with being a little basic.
It's a pity some of the English is a bit dodgy; there are a few mixed up sentences, incorrect tenses and misspellings. Maybe ask a friend to go over text before you commit it to flash, and always make sure to spell check, I should know; I'm a very clumsy speller myself!
A hearty 6 I suppose,
+1 for the nice sense of "innocent fun" I get from it
-1 for the dodgy text. so... 6
oh, and I'm a fast reader, but the section at the beginning moves very quickly! some might find it hard to read. Good work in general though.
haha, i expected there will be a comment like that.
ya, I need to work on my grammer.
i like it
in fact i really wanna see what happens next, keep it up!
ummm...story was where?
Animation: not half bad!
Storyline: urrrrggghhh :P Very predictable, full of cliche, and skipped interesting points because it appears you didn't want to animate them? Well, try to work on that.