I think this short (never watched an episode before) really has some potential. But it's rather goofy and it feels like you're not planning on making it a tiny bit more serious.
The music was really silly and reminded me of Dora and the loop really started to annoy me after a certain period of time.
The background was really good though, but I don't think it'd be that fair to count that in my rating, although it shows you try to make the non-animated things as good as you can (including the pencil).
The overall animation was quite good, and it was funny. But the story was slowly dragging itself on, and after a few times of thinking "Could you just move
on?", the movie was ruined for me.
I believe I can see you enjoy animating these, and that's what counts.
pretty good made me laugh 5
i got a question for you and i hope to get a answer to it via private and public mail... was this all stop animation... frame by frame, if it was i would love to know your trick at getting the pencil to look like that. it was realy smooth.
I LOVE THESE THINGS!
Nice3 and looney toons funny
pacing is too slow
the pacing is way too slow
sound effects are a nice touch, but the pacing is way too slow and overly tedious. you ought look at stuff like Wile E Coyote or Elmer Fudd, which i think has a similar structure/premise to your cartoon (i.e. sight gags, mishaps involving props and other physical objects, lots of sound effects, and a story which revolves around the typical main character versus an elusive rival wherein the main character always gets hurt and the rival always survives with near god-like abilities)