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Pencilmation #?

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So I found this episode that I had worked on about a year and a half ago and never completed. I thought I'd finish it up and put it online just for the heck of it. Lately, I think my animations have been getting a little bit more complex with the gags and this episode just brings it back to good 'ole random play.

Let me know what you think...Personally, I like the ones I am working on now better, but that's just me!



I think this short (never watched an episode before) really has some potential. But it's rather goofy and it feels like you're not planning on making it a tiny bit more serious.
The music was really silly and reminded me of Dora and the loop really started to annoy me after a certain period of time.

The background was really good though, but I don't think it'd be that fair to count that in my rating, although it shows you try to make the non-animated things as good as you can (including the pencil).

The overall animation was quite good, and it was funny. But the story was slowly dragging itself on, and after a few times of thinking "Could you just move
on?", the movie was ruined for me.

I believe I can see you enjoy animating these, and that's what counts.

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pretty good made me laugh 5

hay question

i got a question for you and i hope to get a answer to it via private and public mail... was this all stop animation... frame by frame, if it was i would love to know your trick at getting the pencil to look like that. it was realy smooth.



Nice3 and looney toons funny

pacing is too slow

the pacing is way too slow

sound effects are a nice touch, but the pacing is way too slow and overly tedious. you ought look at stuff like Wile E Coyote or Elmer Fudd, which i think has a similar structure/premise to your cartoon (i.e. sight gags, mishaps involving props and other physical objects, lots of sound effects, and a story which revolves around the typical main character versus an elusive rival wherein the main character always gets hurt and the rival always survives with near god-like abilities)

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4.38 / 5.00

Jul 16, 2009
5:08 PM EDT
Comedy - Original
  • Frontpaged July 17, 2009
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