wow minus the ow

the ppl below me nailed it on the head... if ur gonna make a madnessanythinmg ur gonna have to make it exceptionally well becazuse there is sooooo many knock offs

pros
uhh well that 1 dude who got killed was new (at least to me idk)

cons
everything ppl said below me
heck make it longer that would be nice and slower

THINGS to fix
fix the cons
make it entertainin

END RESULT

im sorry but rite now im gonna call it a cheap knock off that has potential

P.S post me back about wat u think about my post

uhh

good but i dont get it

Random

Weird and short.

Well...

That made no sense what-so-ever, it needs a background story to begin with, the beginning of the animation started out slow and a bunch of random crap just happened without any explanation, there's no date or place or time, and it was much too short, lots of room for improvement, keep trying.

cool

welcome 10 hell LOL