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Turns out ive got flash for one more day so i made a test of something i havent done before...
I'm glad no one bashed this
as others stated it needs a story line of him doing something other then just walking, I liked how you sort of made his walked go along with the tempo of the song. at the end you can noticed this every time his leg comes up and theres a drum beat he sort of shakes, and continues it's nice i'll give you that.
but among other things it's kind of boring, seeing a man walk around is kind of... ya you get my point, you also notice he changes colors and part of his hands dis appear.
just work on these things and in no time at all you'll get a thousand times better, keep up the good work!
do more of these, you are awesome!
4 points for picking great music and 1 point for cool character
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Not bad animating here. You did a good job cutting up the backgrounds in order to make layers and making the guy look like he was part of the scene itself. It's not a bad animation test, but I like things with a bit more storyline in them. Also, I don't think the music really fit. The track was barely started by the time this ended. A short loop probably would have been better.
Thank you very much for your review, i dont like story less flashes either... but i suck at coming up with ideas.
I give this 6 stars, i understand that you love to amke flashes, but you need to create a storyline, blend it in, you can't just have a red man walktrough images, like let him walk and let him discover a treasure, and with that, you can expand your storyline.
Keep trying, and if you keep trying, you'll eventually get more reviews and stars.
Oh and at those asshats downbelow, read the rules when you make a review: If you are giving this submission a low score, please offer constructive criticism that will be useful to the artist. The review space is not a place for you to act like a total asshole.
thank you ill try to come up with a story line next time i make a flash its just that its hard... thank you for a good review.
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