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EDIT: THE SEQUEL SONIC VS SHADOW IS OUT NOW! HERE: http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/504356
This is my first flash vid on newgrounds so please dont give me any shit!
There may be a sequel coming soon...it depends what YOU think :D
PS Sorry the sound cuts out near the end
you need to make it a little smoother and also maybe have them move down the screen instead of in 1 spot well you know luigi has two more lives so we all expect a sequel
You have potential I'll give you that
For your first flash its ok. But you need to improve. On to the review!
The animation for Mario and Luigi is pretty good but if you used a few more sprites of their actions it would be fine. The goombas and the fire flower need sprites instead of ripped pictures. The star is good looking but again needs improvement. The background looks ok even if it is a ripped background from Brawl. Still looks shabby. If you used sound effects like Mario and Luigi fighting or the Goomba growing would add to the effect and enhance the presentation of this flash movie.
The action is below average at best. Even if there isn't much of it, the action proves to be insufficient to my entertainment, for it is too short and not very fluid.
Final Score: 6/10
This flash is an ok first time flash and you do have potential. Just try harder next time and I'm sure your flashes can become successful.
im relly not a fan of the animation, music, or the plot. sorry :(
If you had spit more time on this I think it would have been a lot better. My-self I see someone with good flash skills, but did not let them come out fully in this flash. But I still want to see you next flim. I know that it will be better than this.
the animation wasn't that bad, but you could have used the sprites for goomba and the fire flower, also you could have added some effects or sound effects for us to know if the were hitting each other, if you're doing that sonic vs shadow I suggest putting at least some effects.
only spent about a day and a half making this because i just wanted to show people my skills with flash but with sonic vs shadow it is going to be ALOT better because im actually going to spend time on it ;)
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