Very original, Decent Animation and good background art. You can work on a story for another one. 4/5
This was quite funny. The animation was pretty bad but the dashboard looked cool. Also, the bit where the woman's hair fell off was good. The only problem is that it was too short! Nice work anyway. Up the frame rate next time too.
reminiscent of ...
reminds me of the concept behind the pencilmation series. i like this alot, the con cept, this was not very good, the actual animation, i thot the punchline was funny, but not much else. this is sumthing i think you can run with, so if you have the oppertunity, i say, seize it. good effort, keep trying and you can really make somthin out of this. 8/10 for the idea
Good idea, bad execution
This is a great pilot. The idea could be made longer and even into a great series. But this flash by itself is really not enough. There is one joke that is decent at best. While i can't recommend that anyone watch this i highly suggest that the author build upon and improve this concept.
sowrd of damocles...and a bad date
okay...at least i got the plot!