Keep trying

I think that the only real improvement was that I could actually read the words. I think you'd be better off having all the speech at the bottom, like in Super Mario Bros. Z. If you haven't seen those, then you should. They might help you improve some. Also, it seemed like the music stopped during sound effects. But the music choice was pretty good.

could us a lot of improvement

your sprites are often of a really bad quality, try searching the sprite sites for better ones, also try to put more time in your backgrounds. don't be satisfied too quickly.
also it would be a great idea to look at the other sprite flashes on NG and study how the movements of the sprites, backgrounds, text etc. is used. just put more effort and time in it, and inform yourself maybe with some tutorials. then you'll do much better

PEACE

why am i feeling like im watching a DBZ episode?

very DBZ like scenario...and combat scene...and plot...and lines...then end confirm your anime inspiration with a tentacle rape scene Oo

its power is over 9000? it cant be?!?!?!?!

Uggh...

The animation is scratchy and the story and humor are very dull. Personally didn't like it.

Great job with the sprites

Sprites look great. Wish there was more music or background noise of some kind. It might help keep the pace up a bit. Other than that, great job