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it´s a flash that i made on cs3 on 2 days. comment if it´s necessary.
it´s legended on eglish and the voice is portuguese
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Muito bom. :D

diogoshx responds:

obrigado :)


Está muito fixe :D . Gostei!

diogoshx responds:

para portugueses tem ainda mais piada


Listen, your flash needs A LOT of work. It's fine and up to par for a beginner but PLEASE try to increase your skills.

The sound was very very bad.

The story was badly written and it seemed like you were grasping for jokes.

You really need to work on your animation skills because without that you'll keep making eyesores like these.

All in all I'm giving you a one for effort (even though it only took you 2 days) you seem like you really want to get into flash so keep practicing and I'll be looking forward to seeing your next projects after you progress.

diogoshx responds:

yeah sure

It wasn't very good

Graphics, bad.
Animation, terrible.
Voice Acting, below average (I think).
Story; started badly, then actually seemed to have some point, which is the only reason your rating will be above .1/5.

Only 2 days, well, for an animation of that length, you worked very quickly, and it showed. If you just animated movements and spent more time on the graphics, you could have an ok flash.

diogoshx responds:

ok, i will try


just no that is all i have to say on the matter

diogoshx responds:

have you seen the others episodes?

Credits & Info

3.28 / 5.00

Jul 11, 2009
6:34 AM EDT