This is not one of my best Sprite flash movies, but it is pretty good overall.
Sprites are found on google images.
This took ONE week to make, so be easy on it.
Part 2 coming soon.
My youtube account is thesonicdude1.
I really had to cut some parts to get it on ng so to see the FULL version with the music credits and cutscenes go to my youtube account.
BEFORE YOU REVIEW......LOOK AT IT ON YOUTUBE PLEASE IT IS ALOT BETTER!!!!!
Hmm
probably all of what I was going to say was said by flashman16, link209163, and daroshima0240 said. Oh and yeah I checked it out on youtube full screen like you said and it didn't change my opinion much other than I could semi-read what the text bubbles said.
did you also notice that the scenes aren't cut either?????????
Um...
I don't think I could really improve on what flashman16 said, and link209163 also said basically the same thing. Watch some tutorials, use actual speech bubbles (filled with white), and try to use non-real backgrounds. That should improve it a lot.
plz read the commentary
ITS ALOT BETTER ON YOUTUBE OK!!!!!!!!!
wow.... thats.. NO..
Flashman16 has pretty much said what I would have said. Get preloader etc. You did some work on this flash, I will give you that, however this is pretty much a rough draft of a flash sprite movie then anything else. It needs to be redone before it should return to newgrounds. You got a good idea, but you need to work and fine tune it.
ok PLEASE LISTEN TO THE DESCRIPTION
THIS IS ALOT BETTER ON YOUTUBE
and im new to newgrounds so idk how to get preloader
really cool!
I really like the part were sonic was a robot and smashed things! it was very good
hey thanks. Number 2 will come out in the next 3 days.
check out my youtube poop account for more info :))
okay
You can't see a lot of the text. I really liked the music though. It could have been better, but it's not like I could do any better. It was kinda funny too. Pretty good, but not a perfent 10.
go to youtube and put it in full screen
its alottt better
ty for reviewing u rok!!!!!! :)
