i think what nicol3 was saying is
that their bodies need to move, not just their arms and faces.
the sound quality's kinda bad,
its a cartoon short, so background-wise 'twas ok.
whats with the convulsing spherical object?
i dunno, the joke was ok, i guess, but i think more time spent animating instead of coloring and stuff wouldve done you well.
final note, find your own style, not the anime thing, that is incredibly overdone.
try not to beat dead horses. ( i really hope you get that)
I think you're talking about the fireworks at the end??
EDIT 8/4/09: OK, you mean the stereo. That's a stereo. It looks better before it's exported.
That lip sync took a few days.
That style is what I've been drawing since I was 10 or so, and before that I didn't actually draw very much. You can call it a dead horse. I call it my style. You can't really have an "original" style. Every style of art's been done before. The problem with a Japanese-y style is that it's more recognizable than most other styles.
Happy Independence Day
4th as many trendy hip Americans like to call the 4th of July Independence Day should be celebrated every day. American fucking rocks. Good job moving the characters my boy. I liked how the Bruce Springstien lulz music was tailored to be in the background not just imported into flash and then evented. A
It's not really lulz music (BITUSA is actually about a homeless military vet), but thanks. And yes, America does fucking rock.
Your characters need to move. Srysly. You'll get better at it as you practice, though.
They DO move.