Animation is pretty good, perspective changes are a bitch but you pulled them off quite well, the voice acting isn't great but it's still a good start.
A good start is pretty much all I could hope for at this point! Oh, how new to Flash and editing and sfx I was...
that movie was really good i can't belive that this is your first attempt at flash. well done!
Thanks! Again, this isn't exactly my first attempt though, it's just my first attempt at a series and it's the first episode. Though, it is a very early work from me nonetheless.
Very good art/ animation, and an ok story so far, and good music/sfx. Hopefully the next will be even better.
That's what I'd have hoped as well, though I've dropped production of this since then, sadly...
Good flash, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Although it could use some music and just get to the point sometimes. Nice job overall.
Thank you, and I completely agree!
awesome work man!
i can tell you worked really hard on this n put all your effort in.
the 3d effects were pretty good, and the way you put it all together was excellent, although it could have been sliiiightly faster paced, just so theres less pauses in between dialogue and it keeps peoples attention better. maybe some ambient background music every now and then too.
i actually really want to see episode 2 and see how you improve!
Yeeees, faster pacing is something this thing needs hardcore. And music or just improved sound work in general would really help out.
Sadly, episode 2 never happened...
Thanks for the critique, dude!