A little short
I still think that you could have made this into a slightly longer piece, by adding a few more reasons, before pulling the plug on the thing and killing off the main protagonist. (Oh by the way, it's spelled Frank Miller.)
I'm sure that you can think of more thank just the three little jokes that you would have used to make up numbers 1-9, it's not that difficult. How about the car he drives, the income he's on. There's 2 more and I haven't even really bothered to think so far.
The animation is decent, with the drawing style being deliberately 'unfinished' in that you haven't spent time polishing the images, to make them more presentable, thus making the wife and kids look even more ugly and disgruntled.
Don't get me wrong, what you've done so far is good, with a decent punchline, that hits hard, but it needs something else to back it up properly.
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