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10 Reasons

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rated 3.31 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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short
kids
wife
sincity

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Uploaded
Jul 7, 2009 | 4:07 PM EDT

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Author Comments

10 reasons for me to be happy!

Alright, this is a short short, my best flash so far, I think. I recorded the voice a long time ago (I have a much deeper and manlier voice now, I promise), and found the soundfiles on my computer last week. I thought it was pretty funny so I decided to animate to it. And I LOVE the result.

This is going to be my last mouse drawn submission, since it's my birthday soon. Bamboo here I come!! :3 Also, it's not as animative great as I promised Rutger, but I think it looks good. And I lowered my smoothing, just as you told me, Fawx. Also, "Expand Movie" looks very good on this one. Nice widescreeny mjau! :D

Everything happens really fast, it might be a good idea to watch it again if you didn't understand. And it's good thing if you've seen Sin City. Hartigan-pic (C) by Frank Milla.

Cheers. Reviews are warmly welcome!

Reviews


CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars

A little short

I still think that you could have made this into a slightly longer piece, by adding a few more reasons, before pulling the plug on the thing and killing off the main protagonist. (Oh by the way, it's spelled Frank Miller.)

I'm sure that you can think of more thank just the three little jokes that you would have used to make up numbers 1-9, it's not that difficult. How about the car he drives, the income he's on. There's 2 more and I haven't even really bothered to think so far.

The animation is decent, with the drawing style being deliberately 'unfinished' in that you haven't spent time polishing the images, to make them more presentable, thus making the wife and kids look even more ugly and disgruntled.

Don't get me wrong, what you've done so far is good, with a decent punchline, that hits hard, but it needs something else to back it up properly.

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HolyKonni responds:

Thanks, good review. I was going to leave for summer vacation so I didn't have so much time. And also, Frank Milla > Frank Miller. :3


ZyphoneeZyphonee

Rated 2 / 5 stars

We are never happy.

Allow me to give you 10 stars.


HolyKonni responds:

Allowed, zyph!