Quite good at the beggining
so yeah. ill give you a 5
Author Comments
Well, my very first submission ever. Guess it needs some adjustments, since I did it in a weekend.
Obvious things such as a longer story, more characters and music, well they can be helpful if you specify. Now, to the importarant.
Mario visits Jump! is the story of how Mario entered to the Jump Universe. Sprites were used, obtained from all the possible places of Google image search, etc etc... (Credits will be given in the last version, don´t blame me rippers) Originally inspired by some sprite movies and, mostly, Legend of Miyamoto.
This is a solo project, and characters were extracted from Jump Ultimate Stars and Super Mario World (SNES). All copyrights and copylefts to the respective owners.
**Update**
Yeah, I know it is still crappy. Yet, this is a test version. Voices and actual sound will come in the latest one. Just wanted to know if it could survive a while in here. BTW, the storyline exists, although this is too short for me to show. There will be one in the next one.
gud
for a first flash u did gud mines baddd just put sound and your good dude keep tryin
Entertaining
Not bad for a first flash. Just needs some music and more sound effects and you'll have a great submission.
l33t-h4xor responds:
well, finally someone understood the idea. I will keep that in mind, thanks!
oy...
This just wasn't that good. It really only had two sounds going on, the bgm and mario's jump. But I didn't get the plot very well and it was pretty short. It is true though, if you hadn't used sprites it might have looked better because it seems like more quality was put in. This just doesn't really show to well but then again this is a first submission so really this is a chance to improve on. Maybe the next might not be so bad.
really bad...
This Flash is a insult to one of the greatest games of all time!
(for the people who dont know what jump is:Its a DS game with all kinds of different Anime and Manga like DBZ Naruto and Bleach)
