Dumb
i found this pretty pointless and dumb. Really short. Doesnt have a lot of dialogue. Could use a lot of work. Keep trying and you'll eventually get it
Author Comments
Like my Tank animation, this one took a couple weeks and was for a school project. This SHOULD have been my first animation, but I liked the Tank one more so I finished that first. Like the Tank one, I wouldn't be surprised if I get a low score, but it's complete. Submit and learn, right?
Edit: To address the reviews so far: This took a couple weeks using only class time (~50 minutes) while learning the software. It's not very original because of time constraints in class. Regardless, I thank you all for the feedback.
Hmm..
I liked the concept, but the text was way too fast and was a bit hard to read.
Did you work on this project full-time in those weeks? Or did you put it aside and then continued?
Good effort.
It was a good effort, but it really could've been givin' some audio. Or itleast make the writing a more legible colour XD.
The tank one was better in my opinion ;)
Wow umm
This took you a couple of WEEKS wow umm do not know what to say.
Oh, please.
Reptition isn't comedy. You can't just go to 4chan, take their stupid inside jokes, and then reuse them and think you're a comic genius. Infact, I can't imagine any reason why anyone would do that. Perhaps you can enlighten me. Why did you do that?
Come up with some original material. That's all I'm sayin'.