Nice

I found this quite funny and for only your second animation very well done. I expect to see more great things from you.

Funny

For the winds of change bit, it would have been even more hilarious if you played Winds of Change by Scorpion.

...

Great work mate. You've got some good reviews & advice so far, so all I'll add is that I found some of the chaos warriors hard to understand, but the voice effects were still good.

Ha, boobs.

Well this is pretty decent for your second go.

I suggest in the future you recreate your characters to better suit animation. You've drawn them in such a way that it would be very difficult to create fluent animation and because of that you've resulted to moving limbs in blocky rotations. I also noticed this with the book opening at the beginning.

Try more simple characters and incorporate some more frame by frame into your animation, it'll make it look much smoother.

The storyline was all right, needs a little work but I guess it's your own story.

Overall for your second animation this was good. Don't get me wrong it could use some work but these are things you'll pick up as you begin to animate more and more.

I expect good things from you! Best of luck!

Very Good

Very Good artwork, story and pretty good voice acting, just work on your animation skills. Good work on the Nurglite, by the way. "Thank you SO much Nurgle."