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Warhammer FB

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Uploaded
Jul 2, 2009 | 3:04 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first submission to NG, second flash ever. Not the best, but I didn't want to spam the portal with some rough stickmen or a simple slideshow. Anyways constructive criticism is welcome. I'm still learning to work with flash so the next submissions should be better.

Hope you enjoyed.

Krzyek

Reviews


ShinaroShinaro

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

I found this quite funny and for only your second animation very well done. I expect to see more great things from you.



Sammyboy269Sammyboy269

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Funny

For the winds of change bit, it would have been even more hilarious if you played Winds of Change by Scorpion.


Krzyek responds:

There was a fragment of the Scorpions, just listen carefuly.


fakeloserfakeloser

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

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Great work mate. You've got some good reviews & advice so far, so all I'll add is that I found some of the chaos warriors hard to understand, but the voice effects were still good.



MarkfaceMarkface

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Ha, boobs.

Well this is pretty decent for your second go.

I suggest in the future you recreate your characters to better suit animation. You've drawn them in such a way that it would be very difficult to create fluent animation and because of that you've resulted to moving limbs in blocky rotations. I also noticed this with the book opening at the beginning.

Try more simple characters and incorporate some more frame by frame into your animation, it'll make it look much smoother.

The storyline was all right, needs a little work but I guess it's your own story.

Overall for your second animation this was good. Don't get me wrong it could use some work but these are things you'll pick up as you begin to animate more and more.

I expect good things from you! Best of luck!


Krzyek responds:

The characters aren't complicated. Maybe the limbs need to be redrawn. (already made new palms ) Next time I will motion tween to get more fluent animation.


PariahLordPariahLord

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very Good

Very Good artwork, story and pretty good voice acting, just work on your animation skills. Good work on the Nurglite, by the way. "Thank you SO much Nurgle."