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This is my first flash so please dont be harsh.
Also OMG jimmy is F***ing stupid
>>>> Sorry if writing is to quick <<<<<<
This flash sucks!You can hardly read the words, the word bubbles go to fast, and it is to short!!
I rather liked it
Dont let people like xMichiyo bring you down. For a first flash attempt this was good. And sure you could have "honed" your skills a bit more before submitting but it's not like this is a place were only vets like johnnyutah and egopraptor are aloud to submit. Anyone can. Keep on practicing with it. and put more time into your flash's. I could see you didn't fully erase the grenade pin when he pulled it lol.. thats just careless :D
Sorry, but that's the best way to describe it. This Flash has no: background, voice acting, color, decent animation, or ANYTHING that would make this a good Flash. =/
It needs a background, a background story, some more color, maybe make the sticks a bit more detailed, sound and music, needs better explosion graphics though. Keep trying.
There's a beggining for everything but it could be nice that before you post a flash animations, just practice a bit and earn experience in animation
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