Thanks for the long and constructive review. I know exactly what to work on for my future projects, and am glad that the parts you did like, you pointed them out so I can continue doing those. I'm so glad for people writing constructive reviews; they really make my day.
Yeah erm, the Animation wasn't overly bad, if not really all that impressive. At first it was ok, not brilliant, but not terrible either. But as soon as the world "lulzy" came into it it just degraded into a facade of disastrous horrible Memes and bad jokes. I'm sure every generic "hayguisihavseen4chanamiculyet?" will love this, and call it "lolepicwinXDsorandom" but I just found it dull, embarassing and ridiculous.
And having to click every 5 seconds to move it on? Urgh.
Bellawesome's battle was really the meme-iest part. And that's because she has an awesome face, I only thought it was appropriate.
But you're right for the most part. I did go a little overboard on the references and most normal people wouldn't be able to catch them all. I'm moving into original work, so I kinda just got all the 4chan jokes out of my system. You won't hear them from me in the future. :-#
I was annoyed by a few things. I had to click some text, and not others, and when I clicked the text it would flash suddenly. And I guess it's just me, but I didn't really find it funny. Guess you have to be a big Pokemon fan. If I really wrote how I felt about this, the review would be deleted anyway. I'm sorry man. I'll check out some of your other stuff.
P.S. I won't rate it over there, I suppose you deserve the score for making so many (other) people laugh.
I don't recommend you check out my other stuff. X3 Unless it's Wooper's Adventure, that one is half-decent... but it's Pokémon again. :P
The text you have to click to advance is narrative. It wouldn't make sense to make you have to click during the voice acted bits.
To be honest, I'm not even that big a Pokémon fan myself, but I guess my Poké-obsessed childhood self helped me remember a lot. :P
Noooo, no, no! Reviews don't get deleted for being constructive! Tell me what you didn't like, expand on it. It's perfectly okay if you didn't like it; in fact it's often more interesting to read than the short 10s like the gleaming beacon of genius that is the one under you, and it helps me to make a better movie.
No, no again! :3 Vote how you feel; that's what the rating system is for -- to get the general opinion. I'm not going to cry if it drops a .01; I'm just very content that the score is in the 4s. Here, what level are you, 6? I probably have a higher voting power than you, I'll vote 0 for you!
There, (- 0.0010).
Thanks for the review. <3
Old and unfunny
Now where have I heard these jokes before? Oh yeah, every other Pokemon parody ever made. Please come up with original jokes. I'm so sick of hearing "HA HA I CAN CALL GARY FARTS"
To be fair, this IS old -- two years as of yesterday -- so I probably did come before any crappy comics that you saw on /vp/ or the Nuzlocke fan section. And I didn't call him a swear, at least I did it semi-tastefully. There are only so many things you can derive from the same source material, so that's why I AM moving out of parodies and am going to get original work out in the future. If I ever finish the god damn thing.
Not very funny.
This thing is only funny if you don't count the fact that he got all of his jokes from 4chan.
Then don't count that? It must be more deserving of a 1 if you said that it was funny at many points.