One of your best in my opinion. Why is he peeing at the end? Did you notice you are always terrorising the characters? XD You should let them be happy for once. I'm writing this in the future by the way. But I got back in time. XD There's chewed at the end of the pencil.
Very neat, interesting concept. Like the Looking Glass traveling kinda interesting, you know?
that was cool
is freaking funny.
the dinner part is freakingly funny lolololooloolol