alrighty then

S'allright

Music- 8/10. It was pretty relaxing. kinda nice.

Graphics- 5/10 errrm... this is fairly impossible to rate, being that the pictures were made by different people. Thing is; I went and read the thread, and very few of the better pictures made it in to the flash. And some that were, honestly, pretty dang bad, made it in.

One thing not too relevant, but it bugs me so I must say it; early on in the colab, there was a picture that was just one character shooped onto someone elses drawing from the thread. The shooped one was included; the original was not. Subsequently, the person who drew one small change got the credit instead of the person who made the rest. This wouldn't bug me quite as much, accept that it was one of the better pictures; not the best, mind you.

Anyways, looks like you had fun; and thats what's important, right? ;]

TNEJ (art collab

the music made me happy XD im gunna leave this window up to listen to it forevur it really fits with the story makes it seem like a dream kinda thing kinda like when you read the story of rosalina in galaxy or the opening cutscene of kingdom hearts ... well thats what it reminded me off anyway XD great story :-) was a very good idea and it was pretty funny at times

Average effort

I like that the story is put together by so many different artists. This is a pretty interesting concept.

The art itself is aveage and very rough around the edges, so a little more effort and time spent on the drawings would be good here.

What bothers me the most with this submission is that so much space is wasted with unnecessary things. It's a nice idea that you tried to imitate the NG flash pop ups, but it isn't really necessary as the pop up windows always look that way on their own. As a result we now have a double frame and the text is sometimes so small that it's very hard to read.

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Average

I enjoyed the story, and even more so because it was put together by many different artists. It was coherent and easy to follow.

The artwork could use some work and polishing around the edges, but it's not that big of an issue for me because every artist has his/her own different style. However, some more effort would have been appreciated.

Besides being a very creative project, the audio was soothing and pleasant to listen to and went well enough with the artwork.

Next time, though, especially since this one wasn't animated, polish up the artwork a bit.

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