Well...
Personally, I don't care much for the flash. But I do think it is a success on your part. It seems to me that you did what you wanted to do, correct? Congrats on that. I had a couple chuckles, but nothing major.
Lets see... where should you improve? The loading screen. Yep, that's the worst part about this animation to me. Messed with my eyes.
Nice job. You seem to be pretty good with flash.
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