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-Music Video-Lemon Tree-

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Music Tribute to the song: Lemon Tree by Fools Garden.

This version is cutted, because the full song was to much for me.
This is my first Flash video, and I think it's pretty good for a beginner :)

Have fun watching!

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hahaha!! ^^

wow, great animation dude, ignore the other people, they don't know what they are talking about, everybody thinks, hmmph, that animation sucks, i can do one better, even i though so too, but after i started creating my own animations i realized it was freakin hard to do it, and i understand you perfectly why you cut it, so don't worry, great first video, my first are so worse than this one, hehe enjoy doing more :)
5/5 10/10
Sam.

p.s: i love that freakin song :D

Nice

Good for a beginner. Keep it up

Soooo...

The video didn't really...speak. I could deal with the song even though I didn't like it (that didn't affect the vote btw). It was boring and if you can't finish it, don't start it. That was your biggest mistake.

official-neosoft responds:

Of course it was a mistake, I didn't know a song had that many frames.
But this review isn't very helpfull to me, I can't really learn from it.. Ur only saying I sohuld finish it >_>

pre... go...

IM... Yo... shouldn.. relea... unfini... wor...
i wonder what, i wonder how to rate this vdoclip... 5*percentage length of song/5?
make the whole clip- this one was nice, especially if made by beginner...
in straight words - i request full version :P

official-neosoft responds:

It's my FIRST vid, and I saw some music vids on Newgrounds, and thought: Oh :D I wanna do that too XD

But I didn't know a song took soo many frames.. It's also 20 frames per second, so I think it was a little too high...

Not Bad...

I didn't like the audio too much, but I don't think I should rate this depending on what my taste in music is. This was a fairly good flash. There was some nice manual shading instead of having to look at cookie-cutter gradients for a change. The actual drawing could be better, and the video didn't seem to have any sort of climax like the music did, so it didn't feel very connected. And just a tip: that part with the guy in the corner and the word lonely written on the wall? I don't know if you used the airbrush tool or some kind of line texture, but generally computer made textures look lazy. Also, when you make a shorter film like this, put some more effort into not reusing animations. The highlight of this film was probably the gorgeous FBF animation of his shaded face turning to the side. If you don't have too much to do, it's worth watching.

official-neosoft responds:

Thanks, this is an excellent review, I can learn from this. The "lonely" was written with pen, and then changed line sort to that dotted thingy.(don't know the name anymore).
And I think I should've made the end a little more spectacular ;)

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Score
3.84 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 26, 2009
1:07 PM EDT