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Puns Ahoy!

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Hello, you may rember me from such films as Pixels 4 ever and....
Well pixels 4 ever
all my fans out there i just want you to know that this may not be up to the
same standered as Pixels 4 Ever but the Humor is definitely Better
so... if you Stall your Cake (also known as a cake Stall)
who you gonna call?
The Toe Truck Of COurse!!!

Edit: By the way if twelve seconds isn't enough just watch it repeatedly.
it's never less funny.

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only 1 joke?

im srry but i like puns and this was a horrible one... And toeven make it worse its only 1 joke and its not even that funny
heres my final list

Pros
it killed 10 seconds
decent graphics

CONS
only 1 joke
not even funny
it killed 10 seconds

THINGS TO FIX
fix the cons

P.S post back if you think this is not a fair reveiw(if not the ntell me why)

Unclear meaning

This pun would be more effective if you made the meaning clearer. What is a cake stall? The grainy silent movie style is great and the music definitely helps that. Just make your meaning a little more obvious and keep up the good work.

hay45 responds:

A cake stall is a place where they sell cakes
when you stall a car it means you have let the
engine go to slow and it stops,
in my animation the man in the cake stalls it
in this way it is a pun

Funny but too fast

Slow it down a little, and make it look nicer.. :-/ Like I know it was meant to look old or whatever but I don't think it fits this at all.

Heh

Pretty funny stuff, good job with the old-timey style too.
Make a ton and compile them into one flash and I bet ya it will do good. ;)

hay45 responds:

My thought exactly ta

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Jun 26, 2009
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