That's it?
He messes up on a magic trick... Than what? His girl leaves him? Does he have a girl? What is his name? No plot, and frankily I don't understand it besides the point he screwed up a magic trick...
enjoy.
That's it?
He messes up on a magic trick... Than what? His girl leaves him? Does he have a girl? What is his name? No plot, and frankily I don't understand it besides the point he screwed up a magic trick...
Decent effort...
..for a first-timer, I guess. Still, it needs improvement in almost all areas.