Fun :)
Pretty addictive :) Needs some music though
Author Comments
This is one of my first game ever made but I have decide to put it... it is a simple game but with interesting title. It should be a speedway game, but when I first saw how the smoke from motorbike look (the dots after the main part) the first what I did think is that it look like spermatoozon from top view ... and that is the story of this name :)
sound
needs sound fx and music. i dont like this, but i can see it being better if you just add sound and music, also please make the controls better maybe useing the mouse or something
Control Issues
How can you control the movement of something with just the spacebar? Controls with the arrow keys would be better. Space bar control is an interesting idea, but poorly excecuted.
Good, add sound
The over head view is great. Reminds me of that old nintendo game. Don't remember the name. Super off road or battle toads maybe.
lacks a real meaning
It looks like a racing game, however its most prominent feature seems to be the "sperm" in the title. Since it is just a time trial, without opponents and a real need to race, the sperm theme is pointless and maybe misused just to attract gamers. Coarse-grained graphic shapes, absence of sound and need to start from scratch at the first error complete the features. The only thing that gets 2 points instead of zero is the keyboard interface, which is minimalist (spacebar to turn, period) but original; it's the first time that I see such an idea, and it could be very fun to use, especially in a PvP competition.
A little soundtrack (in this portal you just have to choose), a sports-oriented theme (maybe a science-fiction bike image) instead of the nonsensical sperm provocation, and a way to actually compete (say, in multiplayer, or against computer-controlled opponents, or just against the time) could at least bring fun to the people playing this.
gameonade responds:
First of all thank you for all comments. I can see that without sound it is really hard to make a good game... and with all my recent projects I'm putting some sounds allways. What you can see in this game it is my game from year 2005 - so it is quite old. This is my first time that I have deceided to put it here my game because so far I was doing only games with polish translation :/
The name of this game is originally from 2005 and it is because what I saw after first try of making speedway game (I was trying to do smoke but I did some dots)... and I deceided to release new game with title that you can see here. Maybe the name is not good but it was fun to do such game and seeing people reactions (on my polish website).