will the chiken thimg realy happen if i look in the buiscut

Lolz

Dont look for the chicken!!!

Below average/ failing

This animation could be a lot better, it doesn't look like you showed much effort with it.

Graphics:

--They're stick people, you can only do so much with them to keep me entertained.

--Everything needs improved except for the faces, which were great (at least I think so.) And when I say everything, I mean everything. You even point it out yourself in your own flash, so I won't bother being specific.

Audio:

--The effects you have in the flash are good, but there isn't enough.

--As a previous respondent said, you need to look into voice acting.

Other:

--I think the humor was decent, it could be better.

--It's a bit too short.

--You almost make me care enough about the character to make me interested in what happens to it, but then again, I did say "almost."

--The chicken in the biscuit thing was a bit random, but whatever.

Don't forget to keep practicing, but seeing sense you already used stick people in this series, keep using them, lest you be inconsistent.

Some advice...

A good site for sound effects is www.soundsnap.com. You might also want to look into voice acting, or at least play a little ding sound or something when your characters talk. It's a little boring just reading it in silence.

good job

not sure if this was your first attempt at flash or anything, but it was okay actually. funny ^^