wow
I dont know any alley ninjas that stab people in the eye. But this was alright, just a bit short. I also liked the lack of colour.
Author Comments
This is the first short episode of what I hope to turn into a series. If will follow the narrative of a girl (Jay Jones) and her experience of the after-life. I would really appreciate feedback on what people think, bad or good. Please leave a comment or rating. (Also the guy who looks like a ninja isn't supposed to be a ninja but just a guy trying to disguise his face)
Thank you
Harlandgirl responds:
Its supposed to be more of a murderer covering his face with a mask, but unfortunately it does look more like a ninja
pretty DARK
well, nice animation, the story was good but it was too short, poor she.
awesome
practice animation
and then this would be 10
great voice acting
great story
very boring... but
It's a good concept i guess, just need to work on a better story. This flash was also very short, i would consider it more of an opening then an actual episode. I kinda want to see the next episode though just to see where you're trying to take this series. could end up pretty cool, could end up pretty bad. good luck
Needs a preloader
And if you're going to make it a series you'll need to make it longer. But other than that it was a nice flash with pretty cool music.
