I'll try to be polite with this review.
Your movie is... well... okay I guess. To make this simple, here is my list of the good and bad aspects of this submission.
Good: Animation quality was descent and has much potential.
Bad:No audio whatsoever. Also, there seems to be a lack of plot, which I find to be less entertaining. Humor was dry except for the very end, which was not the best by itself. Also I am not a fan of looping videos.
Conclusion: Not good, but with some major refinements in style, later submissions might have potential.
i liked it, thought backgrounds and shading was great but people dont really accept tests here so make a skit and then post it and you wont get blammed
Thanks for the advice!
This would be good...
If it wasn't completely pointless. If you worked with other artists, then you could probably have something other than a plotless movie.
On the other hand i do not really care wether if people want a plot
sorry man, but not only does this NOT make any sense, but its short and stupid. try adding a story, or putting in more action
For what it was...
As you stated, it was an animation test, so I reviewed it as such. The cycles are smooth and look good. The only reason I docked a point was for his turning around: from what I've seen elsewhere in the clip I know you can do something better than that.
Good work! I'd like to see a full animation with some sound.
Thanks, I also really really hate the turnaround animation! It kind of looks like a bug.