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I really don't understand what's going on. It appears as though you simply stopped midway through the movie and gave up. The sound was a bit hard to hear, and really I have no idea what is going on in this or what is going to happen later. Your graphical skills are definitely competent, but you need more storyline behind this.
it's a start.
What is going on?
Maybe it is just an intro but it makes no sense, maybe it would if i saw later ones, but so far, the voicing was pretty bad, very tinny, and it was just, hard to comprehend anything throughout, maybe a bit longer? a bit more depth, and better vocals? then it could be much better.
it's pretty good for a start. the sound could use some work but the animation and drawing is alright for inexperienced submitters. keep at it and best of luck.