It's okay

It'll do for just an intro but it could be better. The overall graphics looks like something you see in the early 90s and could make a not so great impression. A thing you could do immediately is add a bit of music or just a simple sound effect.

This isn't what newgrounds for!

It is for completed works!

I like it.

Not much of a animation, but it's a good intro to one, can't really review what someone likes for their slogan, but um... It could use some color enhancing so it's a bit brighter and stands out a bit more, other than that, it's excellent, good job.