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Homeless Haven

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The secret life of the homeless

i hope you enjoy watching it as much as iv enjoyed making it.

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Nice work, you created this whole world with nice colour insde a box which I thought was really clever :) Nice music too, really added to it, great work

~DeIvL666~

good theme

something not like to me...the theme was ok, somethign in the animation don seems good to me...a fewer points i believe...but its still good...keep going!!

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its not a bad animation but is too slow!!!!!!

But i like your idea!!!!!

not even

I'm sorry but you had a pretty funny idea but you executed it pretty badly. You drew it really scruffily/messy which may have been the effect you were going for, but you didn't stay very consistent with the style and it ended up just looking sloppy. Also, you need to pay a little more attention to detail, for example at the beginning when they guy slid out of the box, when you changed the perspective, the ball throwing guy was sitting on the wrong side of the alley.
Another thing was your animation. There wasn't anything worth noting, you just motioned tweened everything.
Sorry man, good idea, but bad execution, but keep practicing you'll get there.

Cry* They need a home!

Excellent outlook. Good animation.

Credits & Info

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3,527
Faves:
3
Votes
7
Score
3.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 20, 2009
9:42 AM EDT