It had something
This seems to be an 'ok' for a pilot. Personally, I thought it was pretty good. Although abit cliche, I'll give you a decent score. As for the animation, it was almost all tweened. Practically tween-rapped if you ask me. Tween tween tween. However, you DID use it effectively, and that gives tweening a good name. So congrats on that, the dialogue saves the rest.
I'm going to sound like an old people but, is it a little too much to ask for a little frame-by-frame now and then? I mean, it may not look as great as tweening AT FIRST but PRACTICE makes huge, and I mean huge, improvements. Frame-by-frame is also so much more vastly dynamic than tweening. And it looks more professional to show yourself trying something hard.
I'm rambling on like an old people aren't I? Sorry, wanted to get my point across. Hope the series goes well! Don't steal ideas, and make some kick-ass animation! :D
Yeah I really tweened the crap out of this sucker, and you're right I should do more FBF stuff, and I think Fizz is going to be a great series for me to practice FBF on, expect less tweens in episode 2 for sure!
THERS NO NOSE
Who NOSE where it went?
I love it!
I love the animation and your drawing style!
Well I'm pretty sure the characters are going to continue to look this way throughout the series, so I'm glad you liked it.
How dare you compare me to healthy food!
Ok i feel a little smarter Now
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