amazing
loved the story so 10/10 but -1 star for the molten metal it somehow didn't look right but very nice smooth animation
Author Comments
This my first 3D computer animation. It's made in maya, for animation class. I wanted to make a big factory with a evil and dark atmosphere around it. It took a lot of time, but some of that time was fun:)
I like reviews, because I want to improve my animation skills. So don't hesitate, write a review and don't be too kind.
Thanks for watching!
Cool
Kind of ironic, a factory that makes gears. :3 It was interesting to watch, I think you did a good job.
Wow
Looks a lot like stop motion. Good stuff.
grabbelfant responds:
Thanks, believe me, I've done some stop motion, but camera movements like this are almost impossible for stop motion. But I think I know what you mean. The mechanical stuff is also something that is done a lot in stopmotion films. Thanks for the review
details
I am intrigued by the level of detail in your work. The only reason I did not give 10 is I want to see more of your work on NG. I believe you can do even better.
grabbelfant responds:
You'r not the only one who believes that, I'm joining you. Glad you gave me a 9 instead of a 10. I like 9s better. 10 means that you couldn't improve, and that would be a shame for a schoolproject. I always want to improve. Happily I know some other reasons why you shouldn't give me a 10. Reasons in what way I could make my animation better. Thanks for the review. You will see more from me on NG. So that NG will be a little more creative and a little less dickfucking marioclocksprites.
wow
very nice its like a cross in between an early video game like quake 2 and an classic XBOX game
grabbelfant responds:
It's not something i had in mind, but I think you're right. Probably because I tried to make it as simple as possible so that my crapy PC could render it in time. Thanks for the review