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I think its hard to explain, and it would make more sense if it wasnt <<RWD, but oh well, I like to do things the hard way

The gravitaxis effect and the 'live & color' icarus drug

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hm Sorry

I think I'm too lowminded for this...ehm poetic stuff...

I don't get ANYTHING but that its kinda futuristic and gravitiy skills...
but wtf - police with swords and senseless movements the guy does - he flys up and then meets a police woman which collects something out of her OWN glasses and then leaves? WTF POLICE GIRL U DIDNT HAD TO GO TO THAT DUDE TO COLLECT THAT -.-""" ...don't you guys think the poetic sense is only known by the author himself?
...And you guys just wanna look like you understand it :D - thats what I think bout it but whatever... I'll vote a 5 anyway because don't wanna lower anything which just I don't understand



Ok, so it was about drugs....

It started out as a bust for making some type of drug, (which one of my friends died of overdose)

And basically somehow he propelled himself all the way into space and fall again and was going to die....right?

Yeah, well great job on promoting and stereotyping people that listen to techno does drugs......

Here's what could of been better about it, this is where teh CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM STARTS:

Perhaps make the flash go with the music, it seems to be more about you made a flash, and stuck a techno song with it, the only part that really matched as when he was rewinded back into space.

Make it move: when I say that, less slo mo rewind

Shadow and lights: When the fireworks were exploding, I didn't see any of the colors of the fireworks reflect or rather shadow off of the guy with the blue eye.

A more better morale story: And when I say this, make it to where it doesn't involve anything bad, i.e. drugs. Most people on here are impressionable because they're young, and when I said my friend died, she was 17 and that's what everyone was doing at that rave, though it was X, and everyone was doing it so they pressured her into it, don't want to relate to anyone about that ever...

I like where and what you were trying to do, but just fix a few things.



good

like the animation and design weird concept though



I don't know about this one

It was...well average. I mean I didn't really feel anything for this one, your other submissions are so much more energetic and fun to watch, but this one just felt like it dragged on and the music didn't help either, and the story it was meh guy falling (in reverse), hell even he looked bored through out the flash which is weird considering he's about to get his brains painted all over the pavement or not I don't know.



Made no sense.

I watched a stiff guy falling backwards and forwards and all sorts of weird shit that made no sense. Animation was decent for a flash cartoon, but wasn't very good. The faces look like distorted mutated knives. They could stab someone with what I assume is their "nose" (Anime noses=rofl). Somewhat decent attempt at a time-wasting nonsensical thing though.

6 out of ten.


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Views
245,571
Votes
16,675
Score
4.43 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 14, 2009
10:37 PM EDT
Genre
Drama
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