not bad not bad
u may be a starter too this but u have a lot of potential in you! you need few more weapons though if u make a sequal. i suggest an uzi and a chainsaw
Author Comments
A short flash about a lonely boy who somehow has grenades discovers something which will put him in grave danger whilst running in the forest. There might be a second part coming soon so please give me some things to improve on in your reviews.
Not a bad start
I can tell you are a beginner in flash, so it was a pretty good start. I liked the character designs, especially the main character, and his animations. The backgrounds need work and I think a lot of the animation needs work too and maybe use less gradients?. Overall, it is quite good, I enjoyed the action scenes and the main character, keep up the good work mate
hmmm...
it would be better if it had more of a story before the kid just whipped out the freaking grenades. however, it's okay. make a remake or a #2 with a plot, and something other than grenades, like a flame thrower.
3/5 7/10
the seven is for kick ass music.
FalcoLombardi13 responds:
Thanks, mabye a flamethrower would be good in a second one
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