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What the hell, that was random.
Still funny. -ish.
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A project that I did for my highschool A/V class. The business classes had created some companies and they commissioned our class to create commercialsto be played around the school.
EDIT- I added a play button.
Good animation
This was well animated but a few things i noticed which could have made it better;
One is not making it loop have like a replay button at the end.
whooping-crane responds:
I'll probably add that in.
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Drug induced advertisement. Nice.
whooping-crane responds:
Thanks, man.
Not bad. :)
The animation and movement of characters was of a fair quality, the music fitted well, and the backgrounds were very well drawn, but there's definitely room for improvement.
Biggest improvement needed is definitely a preloader. You can download them from Newgrounds, look just above the Audio Portal/Games buttons. Other than that, you could also use a bit of improvement on lip syncing, and the writing at the end could use a bit of formatting, adjusting the layout and size, just to make it look better.
But yeh, nice work here. Keep animating. :)
whooping-crane responds:
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.
About the preloader: since I made this to play in the hallway TVs at my school my teacher did not want a play button because it had to play automatically. I uploaded it anyway without any buttons but I'll probably find some time at school to change it and then upload it again.
Quite Impressive
Very little of it made sense, but I did enjoy it for some reason.
whooping-crane responds:
Last time I checked, not making sense was one of the funniest things around. Thanks for the comment.