technical problems

I don't know why, but there were issues with the comic:
Was there supposed to be text, in lieu of sound, since others noted this lacked sound? There was also a major issue in getting the animations to move from one square to the other, and I had to right click my way through, because on the first screen, nothing happened, then after I got to the next screen, I pressed Enter, and it took me back to the title page, so I had to right click and hit either forward or play in the menu. I liked the style, and think this belongs in the movie section, not the games section, as nice as this is. It's rather like A Bid For Freedom, only without sound. You need to fine-tune the code and cues so that this plays better, and maybe add a feature, telling the viewer to press Enter or click to advance.
I love this format for comics, though, so I encourage you to rework this, and let me know when you get it working well, so I can give a higher vote. For now, you get a 2~3/5, I'm not sure yet. The problems really detract from enjoying your really cool work.

quite well done

Only criticism i have is the cover page because the "next" button is not obvious enough. Maybe you should make it bigger and instead of people moving the cursor to find the damned arrow, just make it stay there as and no need to move the cursor over an area to find the arrow. Sorry about the vague explanation here since i don't use Flash. :P

okay

It Just need sound

Thanks for saving paper :D

not bad

its not bad but i expected something else you know, instead of a comic, but it was cool