Good.
This is pretty good. i liked the whole series, but it sucks you cant continue. It was an awesome, short lived series.
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READ THIS!!!!!!!! if you havnt seen the earlier episodes please watch those first so will get whats goin on. i will warn you now this is just a filler but i think its a pretty good episode well animated. i hope you enjoy. The name of the episode is Goku's death sentence and i know its short but i dont have flash program at home so i cant work on it here i was only able to work on it at school and i ran out of time i wanted to do more work with it but sadly i couldnt
choujiakamichi responds:
thanks im trying to get the programs to start up again but it expensive
nicee
i liked it im wondering what the intro music is called? i know disturbed had a role at the end of it but whats the intro? =)
choujiakamichi responds:
its called simple and clean
lol not bad
5/5 10/10 because you making a KH story. I Love KH so keep it up pal! try to practice more in the flash.
choujiakamichi responds:
i wish i could keep it up but i cant
Not half bad.
It's a work in progress. Like always, it's fun seeing familiar faces meet and clash with other characters from different games and anime. Good choices in combinations by the way- I'm tired of seeing Sonic and Mario. There was one problem that you're already aware of, I'm sure. If not every user on NG is gonna feel the need to bring it up. At the end when Organization XIII drifts off into darkness... well it felt out of place. That to me was not the biggest problem. The music in the background was. It wasn't the song in particular that bothered me; it was the lack of sound effects and original KH/DBZ battle theme music. Sound effects are important. When some one grunts after being attacked, a small chuckle when necessary for a villain, battle cries when powering up(Goku mainly), and the obvious things like ki blasts. These small sounds added at the right moment reiterate the characters emotions, action, and sometimes the dialogue you write. Speaking of which, I feel that the font you chose clashed with everything. Sometimes something simple is the best choice. If I may suggest, a medium sized black font. It may be best to chose a font that has a theme or familiarity of KH or DBZ or whatever is suitable for the character speaking. Nevertheless having a basic white color behind the text maybe more effective for you because the white will never take away or clash with any color like the red did.
I am not writing all this because I think it's dreadful or because I get my kicks from telling people what they did wrong. I wrote this because I think this series has plenty of potential.
choujiakamichi responds:
i only had limited material to work with i wish i could of put all that but i didnt have any of it sadly :(
NOW IT SUCKS
the 2nd and this episode were a extreme eye sore u started off with really a 8 but i gave u a 10 out of kindness but now u screwed up BADLY u made fights less than 1min and 30secs. And ppl arent so retarded that it takes 1min to read a sentence.
try doing this before u publish another crap episode (Practice Make PERFECT!!!).
So go practice and dont use things from other animes stick with one and create new characters that would actually fit in as a kingdom hearts or Final fanstey character. One last thing fighting scences need more fighting and needs to be longer and put blood and more special effects.
Its possible to make a great or outstanding flash without voice acting.
choujiakamichi responds:
well if u read i only had a limited time so aparantly people are retarded and cant read