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Jun 9, 2009 | 11:48 AM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place June 9, 2009

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A uni assignment for 2d animation class. My oh my am I glad to have finished this semester. Was so stressful towards the end... I think I learnt more about 2d and 3d animation on the last day before the submission date than during the entire semester!!

The assignment was to create a short monologue or tirade that involved some lipsyncing as well as clever cutaway shots. Cutaway shots saved my life! Haha

Anyways, this is Theo.


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice lol. its funny

Not much for me to say. you seem to kno well what your doing. Satire comedy takes some work to make it work. and its nice. good job and keep the work up.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

OMG! my name is Theo!!!!

i'm giving it 10 just becuase the title is my name, but i actually liked it. Loved the kinda predictable ending but it was very well done i thought. good job.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good stuff

I actually kind of liked his monotony unlike XBlazeUK, i think his lack of enthusiasm strengthened his lack of touch with the real world (ie the therapy room he was in) He's just kind of rambling even while the place burns.

The lip synchs were a bit off at times and as previously mentioned, a stop at the end of it would have been nice. Some of the shots could have been a little bit stronger. One of my favorite ones was the gum chewing one, maybe if it was a bit tighter of a crop it woulda been more effective. It was like an akward in between looking shot and it looked a bit insecure.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Its good :))))

I like it i have a dirty mind i thought she was giving him.... but anyways i like you animation and style, the only thing wrong with it is the looping, i have the same problem


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


The animation was spot on, your art style in very intriguing and monologue was great. What lacked was enthusiasm in the voice, or any real sign of personality. It was all the same pitch and loudness. When doing a monologue flash, there isn't an instant attention grabber, so try and make it more interesting by having better voice-acting. And I appreciate that when you're lipsyncing it can be hard to include dynamics when you're trying to fit the animation and the voice together, but it does make it a better flash.
It was still good, though. Thanks.