Ok, so....
It was a good intro, that's how you got the 4, and you distinguished the enemies by symbols rather then just making them different colors, thats how you got the other 3, but to get a 10, you need length (that's what she said LOL)
But anyway, I like where you're going with this, but it needs needs needs to be longer on your next submission, and you should be able to make front page if you play your cards right, it's all there, just gotta put it together now.
Look forward to the rest of this ^_^