Wow, hahahahahha....
Choppy, terrible sound, recycled music, awful "trailer" overall.
You didn't show any real animation, your text placement was mediocre, and I highly doubt this'd be anything worth watching.
There doesn't appear to be a real plot. You're an amateur who can hardly even draw on flash. You're way too terrible to make a movie.
PS: Way to use my sprites without giving credit to me, asshole.