Nice job Lou

Dude, I can tell you put a lot of work in this cartoon. It's awsome. the characters look cool. You put some creative thought into this. I can't wait to see how it turns out.

Dude

This is completely awesome. Your work is phenomenal. I've had to do my own independent film all by myself and it's soooooooo hard! You've done an excellent job, though. I especialy love the voice acting. The only thing I 'd say you should work on is the sound effects. If you even get some people to work on this with you, it'll boost everything overall.

great work

I believe if this series was picked up you would have a team to help polish areas that one man doesn't have the time to focus on when working alone and handling the entire project but it is a strong effort and clear presentation of ideas with that said keep progressing looking forward to seeing more from you

cool

dude that was a great begginin for a flash! continue, i wanna c the end

friggin' awesome.

It was a bit short, but the animation was solid, and the story was cool. What really impressed me, though, was the awesome voice acting. Great job!